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Alpha_7
05-12-2002, 12:30 AM
Ok, please bear in mind these are from an old archive... (Trusty old back up cd), check em out. Varying subject matter and quality.. some was serious some for fun..

THE TREE

By a river, in the brush
stood a tree in leafy hush.
which had been tere for
at least two centuries

It had seen the come and go
of the folk from long ago
back before the settlement
In eight-eight.

It had been there when the blacks
came to roam the great out-back
and listened to there stories
of the dreaming

But it never breathed a sigh
when the drovers passed it by
or when the sheep would
nibble at it's roots

But it stood with tall straight back
at the cattle mens whip crack
for it had seen the many
hardships of the road.

And when the diggers came
to own and stake their claim
it watched as men and
woman tryed their luck.

It had seen the steaming paddle
and the well worn saddle
as it stood and heard the
murky river gush

Those time are past and gone
but the river carries on
while all the trees are
being towed away.

And the tree is cut and varnished
it's brassy knockers tarnished
but it still remembers
times which have gone by

But even though it's dead
it holds it's loft head
and watches through the
window the people passing by.

Craig Goldsmith 96

The Beach
The beach mourned a lost soul
plantive plouring, clawing roaring
silent in hush, bubble and rush
churning, yerning smashing & crashing
thrashing lashing lashing lashing
strolling bowling rolling mountainous
peakind seeking foaming moaning
roaming .... the breeze whispers
‘Tis well ;‘Tis well
and the bumping slumping
shorline rests; deep breaths
and starts once more


Totem
It stood there silent
not moving
frozen fast against the elements
Time it had seen
and much of it
the rain, the wind
the Sun's bright rays
.... hasd matured it
It was old
a symbol of
civilization, or
what it had been
but now cold & weathered
lost in the vicious vegetation
It stood there silent
not moving

Craig Goldsmith July 97

Alpha_7
05-12-2002, 12:31 AM
THE GAMBLE!

My hand is dealt
My cards lie flat
my luck my fortune
That I lack

For I have Played
And lost before
But stakes are high
So win you more

The Chips are staked
The Dice have rolled
All luck attract
for I am SOULED!

Go for broke
Win all lose none
Double of nothing
Just for Fun

Hearts Clubs
Sapdes, Girls best friend
Will led you
To a certain end

But life; a gamble
Take you luck
Throw the Dice
And be ye _____.

Craig Goldsmith 97

Moogie
05-12-2002, 01:13 PM
This is some really good work. I enjoy reading what you have written. Good talent. :thumbs:

delerium721
05-12-2002, 06:55 PM
Now is now is now is now
then is then is then is then
and the future is in a little while

HEHE thought you would like some del creative writing... as i dont write

Julia
05-13-2002, 04:31 PM
Excellent ! I've written for years but don't usually share my work .....

Moogie, don't you write short stories in your spare time?

Alpha_7
05-13-2002, 11:48 PM
I dont usually share my work either... but I thought what the heck.. all of it apart from the hard drive are old, and well I've had my enjoyment out of them...

It doesn't hurt to have some one else enjoying them too..

:)

Thanks for the support gang :)
:thumbs:

Moogie
05-14-2002, 01:21 AM
Any time. :) You still write?

Alpha_7
05-14-2002, 01:24 AM
Occasionally.. not a prolificily (can't spell) as I used to...

but every so often I get the chance.. Uni keeps me pretty busy..

so it takes competitions and things like that to draw out the creativity.

Moogie
05-14-2002, 01:27 AM
I would imagine you are running scarce on free time these days. Hope you can get back to it sometime.